Thursday, 20 October 2016

Persuasive Writing from Koru Hub

Do you wonder what your children think about different aspects of school life? Well, wonder no more, Koru students are ready to tell us!
We have been learning about writing persuasively. Over the next few weeks we will be posting some writing from students who would like to persuade you about a range of different things.
Here is our first batch of writing:

"I think we should bring our bikes to school. First because they give us energy. Second because the bike track is nearly open. Finally we can race people on the new bike track.
We should bring our bikes to school because it is fun."                 James, age 6

"I think that I should do times tables because I don't know all of the times tables. My first reason is I want to do challenging learning. My second reason is that I do hard times tables (so) if I move to High School I know it quickly. My last reason is that so I'm ready to move to High School.
I think that I should do times tables because I don't know all of the times tables and I want more challenging learning."                Jericho, age 6

"I think it would be better to not have school uniform on. I think it is better to not have school uniform on because I get cold and I do not like getting cold and I want to be warm. Second it gets boring because we wear the same thing every day. My third reason is school uniform is not as comfortable as our own clothes.
I think we should not wear school uniform. It will be cool if we can choose our own clothes." 
                                             Taylin, age 7

"Jackson (the cat) should stay outside. My first reason is that Jackson should stay outside because he might poo inside and it will be hard to clean the poo off the mat. My second reason is if he pees on the floor it might stick in the mat and if someone lies on it it will smell bad and it is going to be hard to clean too. My third reason is because Jackson might distract us and we will not do our learning. I think Jackson should stay outside because it is hard to focus. People might go and touch Jackson and they will not do their learning so Jackson should stay outside."                          Zen, age 8


"I want to bring my bike to school. My first reason is that I should bring my bike to school because you can race your friends and you might win. My second reason is you can do tricks on your bike and it is fun. My third reason is you can do jumps on your bike and it is fun.
I should be allowed to bring my bike to school this will allow me to have more fun."     Vida, age 5

"I think we should have easier learning at school. My first reason is I want easier learning so I can know it all and if a person tells me I will tell them straight away. My second reason is if a teacher gives me a easy test I will do it all. My third reason is with easy learning I can get better. 
I think Amesbury School should have easier learning so the kids will get better."    Affan, age 6

"We should focus on our learning. My first reason is if we talk we can't remember. My second reason is we get ideas if we focus. My third reason is you should not sit next to friends because if we talk we can't write.                   Hayato, age 6.

More great writing to come!




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